All Comments on 'Sweet as Sugar Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I had to go back and binge read babydoll after these absolutely love these stories and can't wait for the next one I'd love to see a menage relationship but I think Jim needs to be honest with Jill about when him and Ash are together especially with everything Jill accepted and went through because of them and even the things she doesn't know of in babydoll I also think it would be interesting for someone to hit on Jill at the heart ball and make Jim jealous and maybe realize just how much he really does love her... I'll be not so patiently awaiting chapter 4

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please part 4

I followed the original story and it was so hot! This one is taking up where that left off, Can't wait for the Heart Ball. I can only imagine where this is taking use.

The scene from this story had me standing on end. Babydoll in that tight jean outfit peeling it off and giving Jim everything! It takes me back to the that last series, Wow, their love knows no bounds! Bravo!

Rancher46Rancher46almost 4 years ago

Sweet as Sugar really bring the whole Babydoll Brother Sister love story saga together, it would be shame not to bring it to a final conclusion. I can only hope that you have Ashley and JJ move in with Jim and Jill with some great 3 ways and then have a happily ever after.

Hopefully you give us readers a part 4 real soon.

HragsHragsalmost 4 years ago

I loved to continuing story of baby doll. Cant wait for more. I am hooked !!!!!

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