All Comments on 'Sweet Chocolate'

by DawnJ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot!

I loved how Brad and Dawn taught one another how to make love. I found your story to be very hot! Thank you very much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Really lovely

Sweet, tender, sexy, hot ---- what more can I say? I loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Brilliant

I love this story so much. Full of love, tenderness and hotter than hot sex. Great stuff.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 16 years ago
Well written . . .

. . . believable, and oh so erotic. Well done, Dawn!

CrazyboutDawnCrazyboutDawnalmost 13 years ago
Erotic

Amazing story.. totally apt for the site Literotica.. was real erotic! The author sure has a flair with her pen..would love meeting her.. maybe would be the begining of another erotic story : )

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Brilliant - Sweet & lovely.

The sentence that struck me most: “No!” Brad whispered in her ear. “I won’t ever just fuck you, babe! [...]”

As good as ever!

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