All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams'

Very very well written. It also hit a soft spot because I've had this happen to me quite a few times. Keep up the good writing. <3

My body moves like a wave: chest, stomach, hips . . . a wonderful descriptive line in a sad, desperate tale. Fine, crisp writing, full of heart. Shame this author has been quiet for so long.

I would have rated it a five if there had been more but good story anyway. Keep on writing.