All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams Are Made of This Ch. 02'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Getting better

Getting better, but still need to work on describing their leading up to their love making, undressing and maybe him going down on her to get her ready, not they undressed and fucked ( very bland )

The story over all was very good with the understanding between sisters and dating the one who's feeling got hurt with not only the approval of the other but her help setting up the date.

Thanks for your email.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Polygamy?

Yuck

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