All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams Ch. 04: Stories and dreams'

Hey these, I'm late to reading the story, but I'm very much enjoying it! You have a fascinating setting to play with, here.

Just a bit of a suggestion, when you get to the end of the story - go back and do an editing pass. Ideally, print it and read it out loud to yourself; you'll feel silly, but your brain processes the language differently that way and you'll catch many more errors. (Nothing bad; just a few typos and misuses of "to," "too," and, "two."