All Comments on 'Sweet Hole Alabama Pt. 01'

Noooooooooooo

I hope you have another chapter. Would like to hear what dad did for you.

dirty thoughts began wondering through my head

This is why you should ALWAYS have someone read it BEFORE you post it.

This was very close to the beginning - there is a lot more material, just wanted to give you an example.

I was intrigued by your first submission and glad to see you back. I enjoyed this one and hope to see more. It was hot. Don’t worry about about people criticizing the technical aspects of your writing. You’ll get better the more you do.

Great pacing and length of story is perfect.

Hope there’s another one soon.

You need to continue this story line! Maybe the other daughter and Mom can get involved! I love the smell factor to the story line. PLEASE continue!

Love it