All Comments on 'Sweet Italian Rain'

A very hot story. Loved it.

Very hot, also!

Who could resist? Beautifully written. Great Job.

anonymous I see.

Didn't you see the LOL I wrote after my comment? Duh! I know this is fantasy. I just want my sex (even fictional), to be safe! LOL If you've read my whole comment, you'll know that I liked the story. I've always liked this author's works. And fyi, I'm a "she"! LOL (MP, you must be getting a kick out of this! I am too! LOL)

but still a nice fucking tale. I would have liked a little more detail of the 'actions' and maybe a hint of a follow up between the couple.

'Anonymous' of USA needs to put his name where his mouth is. This is fiction, right? If it wasn't then Susanna is soon carried away. Nice writing though. N.B. 'peak' is a mountain top; 'peek' is a hidden glance.

No condoms? What about STDs? Yeah right, another medical Nazi (the author snerks, lol) This is Lit, a fantasy world, right? lol Other than that, great writing as always, Magica. You have the ability to weave words into beautiful tapestries. Keep writing!