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by Kethandra

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trysttrystover 2 years ago

Totally. Fucking. Brilliant.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 2 years ago

That was a wonderful coming of age story. I absolutely love how you ended it with his family accepting him. Thanks

bkr12kbkr12kover 2 years ago

I've been working on something very similar and keep getting buried in the story. Yours is much more complete, the characters are well developed and overall very likeable. A few minor spelling and grammar issues but overall, wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is absolutely spectacular.

KethandraKethandraover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much for the encouraging, positive comments! This story is a ‘first’ for me in many ways and I was nervous to hit ‘send.’ I really liked the main character’s voice I was hearing in my head, but Pauly is so very different from from in all most every way, I didn’t know if I could do it justice.

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Thank you all for the many positive comments, emails, awards and votes over the past 5 years! I am entering a new phase in my writing. Many stories published here previously are now being expanded, re-edited, improved. I am now offering the new versions on Smashwords, Amazon, ...