by TrampsAnThieves
Great story. It reminded me of when my (adopted) daughter was little ... Thanks!
An excellent, romantic tale - with some erotica added - well done, sir!
I just wanted to say this was great. I thought at first mom was a little over eager, but came around to the 'grown-ass women can chase what she wants as soon a she thinks she wants it' opinion. Very entertaining characters and interactions.
Not love at first sight, but more like love at second sight.
It was quick, but they knew what they wanted and went after it.
Sorry, but if ran into Kim in real life, I would run the other way, probably tripping over all the red flags that were waiving in the wind.
Great story, thanks for writing! I thought you captured Belle's essence especially well. Nicely done!
I loved the story! I've been married to a woman who had children, although the daughters were older. It doesn't matter who the sperm donor was, being a parent has nothing to do with that. 5*
Beautiful story and well written.
I'm a bloke, over 70, and I cried.
And i would have loved it juse as much if there had been no sex at all - it was that good. But the sex added the icing on the top - just there as part of the story without being full on and over the top.
Well done, TrampsAnThieves
A very cleverly written Romance. I guess what I like best was each lead character knew intuitively that they had found a happily ever after partner, and the reasons were for the things that last. Highly Recommended.
The Hoary Cleric
I'm failing to understand how any of this seems plausible. The mother is so over the top prostituting herself that she needs serious therapy. This isn't close to a healthy partnership. Just couldn't make it past page 2
mister tramps, i don't comment often, but i have to tell you i just love how quirky, funny and downright sweet most if not all of your stories are. and this might very well be your sweetest, yet.
Sex-Starved and Instant Love - Hmm SWEET PEPPERS !!!!!!!!!!
**** Stars
Burning Love
This story takes us in the world of unbelievable romance, just as romcoms are supposed to. It does not need to be anchored in reality for it to be enjoyable. 5*.
What the hell? That is such an incredible- and wonderful - change of pace. If it wasn’t for her “offers” this could be in any romance section. Immediately after reading your story about a boy changed into a rat, it’s incredibly hard to believe it came from the same writer. Great work, 5 stars
Really good, but a little too much summarized and rushed to be great. I love the general plotline, but it lacked some details to make it feel real. Still, a happy little story. 4*