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Click hereTom moved over to a T.V. and V.C.R. sitting in the corner of the room, pulled a tape from inside the envelope and popped it into the player. He pressed play and, as the tape cued up, he moved over to the table and emptied the rest of the contents of the envelope across its entire length.
The scene was absolute mayhem as 25 people lost their minds.
Yells, screams and crying ensued as everyone, all their closest friends and family, saw photos of raunchier pornography than they had ever seen in their lives.
A lot of angry eyes looked to Tom.
"This, apparently, was Susan's bachelorette party," he said.
The well-edited video began to roll in the corner and all eyes turned. It showed, in the span of two minutes, the girls arriving to the room, drinking, laughing and then the night vision kicked in as the girls changed their clothes for robes. It showed Sarah disappearing into the back room and then it was light again as five women followed the stripper. Tom slipped out of the room as damning night vision photos of them putting on the masks were placed next to video of them as they fucked the masked stripper.
There was simply no disproving it.
Susan's grandmother looked away as fast as she could from the screen, only to be greeted with an 8x10 picture that had the luck of landing right in front of her. It was from a camera situated under the glass of the table capturing all five girls licking up a puddle of cum. She vomited in her hands and then passed out.
Tom headed to the car, listening to the satisfying sound of screams and slaps and crashes coming from the restaurant. He was prepared to drive off after fulfilling his revenge. Sadness filled his heart as he started the car when the passenger door swung open and Sarah sat down in the seat next to him.
She beamed at him.
"Can I come with you?" she asked in that innocent voice.
Tom smiled as she closed the door.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI liked it. Fair fetched yes, but I got off on it and enjoyed the storyline. I say everything ain't for everybody. I read it for what it was not the fact that it could be true. I say great job, easy read. Use your imagination and move on.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoVery simple, even for fiction it is so far out there you should have written aliens coming to earth and screwing the bimbos also.
Rocketmann22over 4 years agoThe idea of his fiancé cheating the way she did with only a short time to the wedding, she got what she needed (nothing of his). The gardener knew she was going to marry the owner of the house he was working sooo, what was done to him? She and her mother and sibling wow got f’d up and humiliated big time. The only short side of this mess he still got involved with that family. Some explanation is need for us to like this story.
Anonymousover 5 years agoAnd I really enjoy the whole "playing innocent to get family fortune but ends up with nothing" plot twist. The one flaw I can think of is the same as everyone else apparently has, that the ending was weak and needed a bit of explaining. Other than that, everything was well written and sexually arousing all the way through. I wish there was a sequel to this where they explored more, and I would have liked to read the fallout of Susan's family and friends getting busted for their gold-digging ways. I bet you anything their entire family gets put on some kind of list of gold-diggers and end up being black-listed or something.
Overall, this story reminds me of a pair of other stories I've read/seen. One where a fiance is found cheating the day before the wedding with her maid of honor, the best man, and the MoH's husband (in a drunken bisexual foursome) where the end result is the groom storms out after revealing their scandalous ways, goes on the honeymoon and ends up fucking an entire Dude Ranch of staff members, reconciles with his best man and ends up entering a relationship with the Dude Ranch owner. The other was a movie called the Art of Travel, where a young groom reveals that the best man slept with his bride, tells them to fuck off at the altar, and ends up going far away to another country, fucks two women he met in a bar, and goes on a long hiking trail with a couple and their hiking crew, and falls in love with a young woman on the trail, and they live happily ever after in the end. And if I had to pick a third thing this story reminds me of, it's the main plot of Imposters season 1. I recommend you watch it, it's a really good show!
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThe story is over-the-top unrealistic at so many points constantly throughout that listing them might take more space than the story. Some suspension of belief is expected, but this much? No way. I read it like I would a cartoon or science fiction, so it was interesting though not applicable to real life. So 3 stars for that.
I would like to defend the story from a couple of the comments. He only TOLD Sarah he was going forward with the wedding so he could pull off his rehearsal dinner expose. That was the end. He left. No wedding.
Next, some take the Mom to be 38, making her 12 when the 26-year-old older sister was born. But what the narrator says is that Mom looked to be in her late 30's, but probably was in her mid 40's. 46 is mid 40's, so then 20 would be her age at birth of her eldest.
Paul in Oklahoma
