All Comments on 'Sweet Revenge'

by daddyslilbutton

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FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 8 years ago
More please!

Quite an enjoyable story - you write well! Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good stuff

Well written and entertaining. Just the right amount of teasing with a super satisfying ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story!

Loved the sexual tension throughout the story and seeing the main character's confidence grow. Nice payoff at the end!! Please write more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
"Somewhat newly married"?

And it was downhill from there. To the non-ending. At least we can hope that she told her husband she wanted a divorce before he realized she was a whore and passed along to him some nasty social disease. Nothing sexy or erotic about this mess.

UGH! 1 star.

NexttimeroundNexttimeroundover 8 years ago
So formulaic

Husband to blame and then of course the guy had to be black.... another strike for the Literotica propaganda anti-white male pro-black male campaign...

Thought for a moment that there would be some genuine lesbian fun that would be a bit different anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
AIDS awaits

Just looking to spread the infections wherever they go....

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