All Comments on 'Sweet Slutty College Kitty'

great story. Plenty of emotion and feeling. - scarecrow

this is the best story i've read so far... and i've been reading stories on this site for almost 2 years... it was well written, very descriptive... damn fine writing, great story.

if u have been reading these stories for two years you need to get a life!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh that was so goood! I wish was Kitty ;)

I have nothing against gangbang stories (otherwise I wouldn't have found this story), but I am personally offended by the ending of the story. You even include that they made "animal noises" after they were BRANDED. It was a very well written and erotic story up until that point. You did not have to lower the women to the level of farm animals to complete your story. Thank you for turning me completely off.

Hot story until you ruined the ending. Why was it necessary to brand the woman? Shows an unnatural hatred of women. Here's an alternate ending: After tonguing each other, Kitty and the other slut decide to suck off two lucky men as a finale. They take the men and seat them in a chairs. The trwo sluts, get on their knees and slip the "lucky men's" dicks into their hot and waiting mouths. Then the sluts look at each other with a pre-arranged signal and bite on the head of the dicks until the men scream in pain and then pass out. The sluts look at the dicks, proud of their handiwork and smile with pleasure. The men are bleeding and have the sluts teeth marks as permanent reminders of the days activity.....Is that a good ending for you? I don't think so....

Of course, branding someone is going too far - in real life! So is kidnapping and gang-raping someone. This is just a fantasy. To say you loved the forced gangbang but found the branding "demeaning" or "hateful" towards women is a bit stupid, don't you think? Within the fantasyworld of the story, both were erotic acts describing the character's fulfilling their submissive natures. Don't take these things too literally.

And to the author, I think your stories are very sexy.

it was great... helped me live out a fantasy, if only in my mind's eye.

The branding of the two sluts hunny and kitty as the little owned beasts they were was a high point of the story only one thing could have made it better would have been the two sluts being collared!

Branding does not denote hating women it denotes ownership of them and if more women were branded and owned this world would not be so screwed up!

this was a great story, one of the best i've read..mmmmm ;]

I don't think it's demeaning to women and I'm definitely a feminist. Some women (like me) enjoy being treated like that. Hah. If someone thinks this is bad, wait until they see the stuff that's in the BDSM category. Yumm.... ^.^

Branding someone could leave a horrible scar, that isn't attractive. But hey, it is your story. And in the end we write for ourselves. I just want to read the follow up where Kitty buys antibiotic, topical cream to avoid infection.

great story thanks

especially for a one-page story, that was one of the BEST i've ever read...!!!

And even brandings. Plus they were effectively made slaves for life. I wish my fraternity had thought of this.