All Comments on 'Sweet Submission Ch. 01'

Please continue this story. This was so hot - you had me on the edge - and then the story ended.

KUDOS!!!!! After reading this, I've decided that for part two, I'll keep a stack of towels or something handy. VERY good story. I do hope we don't have to wait too long for part two, though I'm thinking you enjoy making the readers, especially women, wet and hungry for more.

I think I held my breath the entire time I was reading, 'cause I definitely feel light-headed now. I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is the most erotic thing I have ever read. You have a real gift, fantasy123.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing this.

Keep writing! one of the most amazing stories on here ever. Great job on everything :D

Really amazing writing! It's so hot, I feel like I've been missing out on "real" sex all these years! :) LOVE Alex & would love to see more!!

you definitedly have a gift.it's like you looked right into my heart,and wrote one of my deepest,hidden desires.i could see,many of your descriptive passages.i could be this abby,with all her hidden desires and wants.at least in this fantasy,she got to touch heaven.please write more.gem

I think you are one of the most talented writers on Lit. Please keep writing!

Incredible psychology and sexuality. One of the very best.

I love it!

This is an absolutely incredible story - describes all the most important and so often neglected aspects of submission. Amazing writing, so much description and the most brilliant use of suspense. Fabulous. Really really fantastic.I loved it. And I want the male character all to myself.

One of the best stories I have ever read on here! Absolutely the most delicious suspence, that held me captive, from the first to the last word. Thank you, thank you for writing such an erotic delight x

amazing love it keep writing!!

This is wonderful. I love the sensuality of it. You should be proud.

One of the better ones I have read on here. :)

Regardless of the subject matter, your talent for description is both masterful and captivating. I truly enjoyed the immersion into the language itself as well as the imagery it evoked.

I look forward to reading more of your material.

Sophie xx

This story is so beautifully well written, both parts 1 &2.

Exquisitely written and tantalising erotic.

This is extraordinary descriptive writing.

I absolutely loved it.

XXX