All Comments on 'Sweet Talk Ch. 04'

But man, that Andreas is a jerk! Poor Jay.

Fantastic job!!! Although I don't like waiting, this chapter certainly was worth the wait. I hate Andreas!!! And I can't decide if I want Anna and Jason together or Anna and Sam! Keep writing and please post the next chapter soon!!!

Ahh! Love it! Jason is going to kick his ass again! But he also needs to wake up and just kiss her already! Urg Man! Please more and soon! Cant wait! Thanks!!

but i just wanted to tell you that i literally squealed when i saw chapter 4 was posted! okay ill read it now! thank you!!!

after 5 pages i'm surprised he isn't shipped yet to an asylum, since she drove him crazy. i hope nothing happens to Anna though. I hope J and Sam goes to Anna asap because that last scene gave me a dirty-old-man kind of feeling, quite...disgusting. i am very curious how you'll resolve Sam's attraction to Anna, and how Jay would realize he likes her. anyway, love this installment and i hope you do give us the next one soon!

This honestly one of the best stories on the whole site!! Please don't stop posting more stories, you really are truly good at what you do. I like how you introduce your characters and don't jump straight to the sex unlike all the stories on the site!!! don't stop writing!!

p/s. love the characters!! Jason and Anna go together so well.

xxxx

I was so excited to see another posting for this story. Forget everyone's issues with Jason, I love him. He will come around eventually I'm sure. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Sam is the man and he deserves victory.

Great chapter! So good, I don't even mind the cliffhanger! I'm definitely hoping Anna ends up with Jay though. She and Jason have wanted each other for ever (even though Jay was too stubborn/male to realize or admit it) and they would be so cute together! Sam is nice but he's not everything to her. They should remain good friends and once she takes her psych classes, she can help his sister to mentally recover. Hope Jay beats Andreas and that Anna lets him. Good luck with your apps and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

please do that for sam and adreas- that could be really really cool :)

im waiting for chapter 4.5 :( anyway, just wanted to make it clear that i am for J&Anna. is this a love triangle? it doesn't seem that way to me because Anna clearly likes Jason! i hope you don't confuse her or make her settle for Sam. He's a good man who doesn't deserve to be loved any less than he actually deserves, did that make sense? :D

Oh, now I feel bad for Jay after knowing what happened to him with his past gf. At first, I thought he was such an ass to Anna. It's funny to read how he sees Anna in a different light now. His and Sam's reactions to her sundress were priceless. Sam is a really good guy, but Anna's only got eyes for Jay. I hope Sam can find somebody of his own. Perhaps a spinoff? :P And I've said this before, but you're really good at writing dialogue! It comes across as very natural, funny, and charming. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I'll be honest and say I'm actually kinda rooting for Sam, too! I know.. I know... it's supposed to be Jay. But Sam is awesome. If he doesn't wind up with Anna, I hope he gets someone equally as nice. And if not, I'll gladly take him myself! Excellent work! I'd like to see more of Andreas as well - And yes, there is a lot wrong with me.

i like both sam AND jason... but i guess she can have jason so I get sam!

I'm having some real issues with my writing these days. And, by, "issues," I mean a painful inability to write--or at least, to write anything that isn't crap. So, just want to let everyone know why I haven't updated yet. If you'd like me to email you when I do submit new chapters, go ahead and send me a message or an email (the address is on my profile). That way, at least you're not waiting around for me to get my act together.

i don't think i can wait. "patience is a virtue" that's not working out so well. i read this whole story in one night, i couldn't stop reading till i finish this chapter. i can't wait till the next chapter comes!!

i hope your writer's block is a thing of the past and the next chapter is coming soon!

Found this delightful story in my ramblings.

Please hurry the next installment.

I am an old man but enjoy the emotions that you are revealing in your characters.

hi! i love youre story's, your amazing!

but it's a shame that the story isn't finished, and neither is the story about rainy...

please consider finishing them, you are an amazing writer!

For Jason to go kick his ass. I've read this story before, but still wanting Andreas to get his ass kicked at this point! Such a sleazy bastard!

And the worst part is in most of the stories , the guy who is an asshole ends up getting the girls. But the one who is always there for her, who cheers her up and who treats her with respect ends up getting dumped in the last minute. Fuck this stories man.