by IceBluePhoenix
I was really hoping somethng would come of the thing between Harmony and Mr Ash and he seemed to soften towards her and show more of his feelings and now she's having it off with Coach - who she couldn't stand? i think u shud go back to Mr Ash i like him better. otherwise well done
Its like a totally different story now. Harmony can't just change into a receptacle with no sexiness. Where are you taking this? You are changing a great story