All Comments on 'Swimmerboy Pt. 02: Mom's Second Best'

by mattmatthews

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w8ingnoww8ingnowabout 7 years ago
Great

This is a great series. But it would be easier on the reader if the best friends had names.

dmarqt2000dmarqt2000about 7 years ago
Love the series

I hope you have more stories. I love them. I agree with w8ingnow it would easier with names.

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 7 years ago
How?...

How could he "flood her pussy with his sperm" (in their first encounter) when he was wearing a condom?

I'd also like to Third the suggestion that you give the women actual names, and REFER to them with said names. The "Best" and "Second Best" shtick is hokey, depersonalizing and got old very quickly.

-Rei

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This series is incredible. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
One Star

Just for the no names. Seriously, it's neither imaginative nor amusing, just annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very good

Of course you will ignore criticisms about names. Who cares? Why is that important? You describe sex with hot women very well. I've gradually changed my view of middle-aged women, that is , if 40's is any longer considered middle age. Your generation gets to enjoy them in all their sexual maturity. They know what they want and go for it with gusto. Perfect for a young man.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
It's interesting what are given names

Kahuna is Hawaiian for Shaman Leader

Cajones are the testes or balls

Every time you write about how big his two Kahunas are I have to laugh.

Thanks

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
Really

getting tired of you calling them Best, Second Best, etc. I'm done. A 4.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

I’m assuming that English isn’t your first language so I feel you have done a good job of writing this, it needs a reread to fill the missing words to make it better, nice idea

CasyWoodsCasyWoods7 months ago

Hott Mom's are indeed the best .!.

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