All Comments on 'Swimming Pool Surprise'

I enjoy your writing and your stories, thanks for sharing x

Another good story by Beth. She sure had a good time in Greece. Naughty girl.

I love your stories Beth

really liked your story hope to see more

when reading through your story's I found this one i had read a while ago

nice it seems i was attracted to your stories even before i knew what a great author you were.

Love how you love the older men.

This belongs in non-consent / rape / whatever.

That was very erotic....to be continued indeed 😁

loved reading this and wish it was me that had come round, being an older guy at 62, a woman i know does the serpentine swim, she lives in east kent

Very solid enjoyment xxx

I've done a bunch of open water swims. Mine are much more dull.

Loved this story. Reminds me of the spying I used to do when I was a young teen. Shane i wasnt invited to one of the womens homes though.

Love to hear more.

Wow Beth this is a little different twist from you and I really liked it!!! You are an excellent writer who spends as much time on setting the scene and what you feel as you do the porn.

Thanks!!

Scott

Loved it can’t wait for part two. I hope “Old Tom” gives you what you need!

Well done! I wouldn’t have wanted to dash away. Finn

A very intense and erotic tale, Beth. Thanks for the rise...Cal.

mmmm...loved it...could feel myself with you!

I'm afraid I didn't enjoy this story in particular after reading 5 or so others. It actually started quite nicely and looked to be building to an interesting finish. But for me it became terribly rushed and over harsh. I also found it implausible for an older man to have sex so many times that quickly. Sorry but that's my honest opinion. A.

Wow, was that stupid.