All Comments on 'Swimming with Mum Ch. 01'

Hoping for Pt 2 soon ;)

DID I MISS SOMETHING?? I DO NOT SEE HOW THIS STORY COULD BE CATEGORIZED AS INCEST/TABOO. IT APPEARS THAT AN IMPORTANT PART OF THE STORY IS MISSING THAT WOULD PLACE IT IN THE INCEST/TABOO CATEGORY

Great start! Looking forward to more chapters

WTF???? Not a single word of incest? Is this to be continued? If so, you should have indicated such. Well edited was a plus but not what readers would expect.

I presume there is more to come.?

Thats it no nudity sex or anything so boring

What's the point of the story? All you have is a boy growing up and going to college. Absolutely boring.

Great start, looking forward to the next part, hope I don't have to wait too long.

A great start to what could be a very good story.

Nice, steady start, laying out the groundwork!

This is exiting if you live in Stoke!

Hi everyone, Mrs M here, looks like I forgot to say in the story that this is definitely going to be continued! :)

Cock out in my hand stroking it just waiting for the excitement is gonna see his mom or Lydia naked… nope total boring ass let down that kills cock

Ignore the comments from those impatient souls who are ticked off you haven't given then so much as a boner in your first outing. Keep writing!

Next chapter please!

Great opening, can’t wait to see where you go with Mom &/ Lydia

5*

Tc

A well-written introduction and I am looking forward to part 2

Hurry up and upload chapter 2!

Well written and a delight to read. Looking forward to next chapter.

Great story! Looking forward to more, I hope real soon. Thank you!!!

Jesus...I didn't think I'd find a novel longer than War and Peace on a porn stories site

Kinda long and didnt go anywhere....well written and detailed.

Thanks for the read.

Story was too short, but interesting. I hope you will continue. Thank you.

I really liked this opening chapter. Well written, easy to read and engaging. What's not to like? Looking forward to reading the rest.

It`s starting out nicely,,I really don`t mind a long story if it`s interesting and believable,,,I believe this is going to be a nice story..

This is a wonderful start! I love the slow burn stories the best, and this one seems very promising. On to the next chapter! :)

There's already way to many characters in this story, you can introduce characters later as you proceed through chapters but I don't think starting out an incest story talking about the main characters friends are bombshells are ever the best strategy, mom, son, dad, sister, ect...

I’m enjoying your writing, ignore the brickbat comments, it’s a great start. Thank you!

Why the fuck does this have such a low rating?

Good start. I think it moves along just fine ... for now.

4*

BJ

This is not a wham ban story. It has a build up and a lot going on. I suspect that it is a little bit to intimidating for some readers. All the criticism by those that struggle to read has put off a budding author. That is a shame. I hope the author has changed name and gone on to write other stories. Five stars for me. Thank you for your work.

Wow, I just love the writing! Love the build up of the story, so tender and yet funny and likable!

I actually laughed out loud a couple of times, what a lovely beginning!!

A work of art. Thank you. A story woven into life, the byways and excursions are a delight. It is life in its many facets.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops. I have my own idea of how things could start happening with his Mum, so it will be interesting to see if it's on similar lines to how you plotted it out. I very much enjoyed your writing and character development. Also a bonus point for including Sheffield - the city that I grew up in & still refer to as home, even though I don't live there anymore.

Can’t wait to see where this goes.