All Comments on 'Swinger Vacation Ch. 03 Day 03'

Not sure why the deep back story was so necessary (5 pages)?

I assume the next chapter will integrate this into your primary story? While this was indeed hot, it appears lengthy just to get her father turned on enough to fuck her. Guess we will have to wait and see. The only true relevancy was in the beginning of this chapter when Sofia admits her plan to get her dad alone.

Loved the story! Must admit I wish it would have stayed on track between daughter/father, but it adds to the suspense.

I feel this is totally off track.

We already know she is the biggest slut out there. Let her father fuck her in front of everyone at the resort.

No sense in questioning your path with that long backstory, others already did. I’m hoping for a few more chapters of Daddy/Daughter and with others at the resort.

I totally appreciate the comments made about chapter 3. I understand that some of you feel the story has changed direction. That’s not the case. I just wanted to give Sofia a voice and to open up possibilities for future chapters. The story has a long way to run yet, but I’m sure you’ll all be happier with the next chapter.

As I said, this is a short term loss, for a long term gain. There has to be a reason for everything I write. It can’t just happen for the sake of it happening! I hope that makes sense?

Jack

The Author

Thanks for explaining the detour.

I’m loving the story so far, and glad the implication is that there will be many more chapters. Guess I’m back to checking daily for the next one!

It's really very exciting. But including a bi male sex action is really a turn off to straight guys. Please don't include anymore male and male sex encounter.

I'm sure there's a lot more straight males reading this than bi males and I'm sure they agree with me.

I read your comment so I see what you were doing with this installment. I understand wanting to give the daughter more agency,but this was a really inelegant way to do it. If you had all this backstory in your head before you started writing, you should have written in a separate story. If it just came to you, you could have referenced it and then written it out as a separate prequel story. But as is, it's just a weird, complicated detour to the main story you were trying to tell.

This story thread has gotten me so wet I’ve been checking every day for chapter 4.

Continue pleas à

Please ,please continue

We need chapter 4 my pussy can't wait any longer

This has been by far my favorite series yet, i check every few days for chapter 4 and still nothing. Please finish this sexy story.

Waiting to the story with the hot ts from the first chapter

Pretty pretty please ..??.

Still waiting for Chapter 4 man!!! :)

Your fans need nourishment. We need your words.

Please post further part, cant wait whats next ....hot and tempting

Come on man. Day 4

We need the next chapter... Your writing is so well done!

I really hope you have more chapters coming as this is a stimulating tale

You have 243 followers waiting for your next chapter. If not here, is there someplace else we can find it? Whatcha doin'?

Didn't fit the theme of the series!

This was well written hot, and had a neat little plot twist. HOWEVER.... the story had nothing to do with dad and daughter at the resort. Should have been a prequel or a stand~alone story.

After the first two chapters I was a littel disappointed by this... wouldve been great as a prequel but not the day 3 anyone hope for!! You diffinitely need to write more chapters... we need to find out what happens with Sofia and Jack!!

You should continue this story.

Please give us more.

He is gay when he want and fuck other man.

There is no in between.

Fantastic probably the best storey in this genre I have read. Please let’s have the next episode soon. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

2* for an unfinished Story

I really enjoyed your story. Well written, easy to follow. And a surprise ending. Thank you

I'd love to see this continued

Why do authors feel the need to change character perspectives mid-story. Not a fan.

Why have you not finished this story?

When are you going to finish the story?

The whole blackmail business was a major distraction. I would have much preferred if Jack had simply fucked Sofia. First two parts were great, then this disappointment.