All Comments on 'Swingers Bisexual Party Pt. 01'

by Simbaisnotme

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

Get an editor. Language problems distract from the story.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
like the storyline

but it was hard to follow. i agree that you should consider getting an editor. but good try and i'd like to read more

SimbaisnotmeSimbaisnotmeover 4 years agoAuthor
Editor

I’ll see about getting an editor. Thanks for the feedback

GrandTruthseekeGrandTruthseeke8 months ago

One of the hottest stories on this site !

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