All Comments on 'Swingers' First FFM Threesome'

Good job. Loved the characters. Keep it going.

It seems as though Grace is the girlfriend and Ania is the guest, so the last line, "this is how Ania and I would live from now on," doesn't make much sense unless he's switching girlfriends. Aside from that, lovely :).

Hi, thanks for the comments, much appreciated. Yes, I did of course mix Ania and Grace up in the last sentence...the curse of using false names! I have submitted an edited version with that change in, I was hoping no-one would notice until then! ;)

I'm a female always looking for MFF stories but most the stories are about a woman being done by multiple dudes. This is what I wanted. Very hot.

I loved this. I could be Grace. I love being a dirty slut - but only in the bedroom. It has left me wanting more. I hope you continue to write in this vein. Personally, I would like a bit of anal play incorporated. Other than that, it was very good and so hot.