by CharlieXMX
Hot stuff, also sweet and romantic, but I have to admit that it took a really weird turn with Michael abruptly not being okay with fooling around with Ari.
I understand him not being ready for anal, but to call Ari a boy seems odd after everything else Michael was okay with. The story then swerves back on track, but I definitely had a WTF moment that made me go back and re-read sections to see if there had been any hint of Michael being reluctant or uncool with Ari's transition that could explain his slip-ups.
Either way, still a good story and I'm looking forward to what comes next!
I really enjoyed this story. You are planning on a follow-up, right? Please. 😃 5/5*
I can completely understand that. The intent there was to show that Michael felt insecure when he tried being the bottom and began to question himself in that moment, which I think could be plausible for people who feel vulnerable and inadequate in a situation like that. Especially if they feel self conscious of being considered gay or bisexual. I appreciate your feedback very much and this story will continue!
Totally hot! Great job at building their relationship. Michael needs to tumble to his bisexual feeling and reciprocate for Ari. Maybe a 3-way with Hailey helps him become a pansexual.
Please finish this its good.! I am wondering about Hailey and her relationship to Lucas / Ari. Does she have “a secret” and helped Lucas make the decision to become Ari? Please continue this.