All Comments on 'Switching Sides'

by CRWestminster

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NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
Story is just the middle

There's no beginning, straight to the sex and no ending. I fell like I owned a book in the middle and read only one chapter. Shame, it could've been great

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
Where's the buildup?

Where's the anticipation, the character development? Great sex, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great start.

I hope you will continue with this story.

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