All Comments on 'Sylvan Courtyard: Ch. 01 - Moving In'

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WrexscarWrexscarabout 2 months ago

...and he's back and it's glorious. A wonderful start to one of your glorious ridiculous adventures. As of this moment we don't have many named female characters so few suggestions are possible.

Although threesome with Jessie?

A campaign by some of the residents to make the pool area clothing optional?

pcman1950pcman1950about 2 months ago

Another promising saga begins.

KeirathiKeirathiabout 2 months ago

Just a note, in the final scene, you called Susan ‘Sarah’ once.

lexlogan8lexlogan8about 2 months ago

Loved it! I would, of course, love to see Susan's perfect ass, but I'm sure to enjoy whatever you serve up.

DINGDONG33DINGDONG33about 2 months ago

Love it what more can be said good 👍 story good writing keep up the good work Thanks

intim8intim8about 2 months ago

Nice and simple with a hot finale that left plenty of room for future hijinks. I just hope those hijinks have something substantial behind them and around them.

And yeah, I just assume the pool is clothing optional. Not formally, just a thing some people do and when nobody complains, it goes on.

Of course, Susan leaves her porch light off when she has her girlfriend or boyfriend over. And Ken isn't the only one who is aware of the see-thorugh curtains and is watching. Josie knows all about it, which Ken finds out when he finally tells her and her reaction is a little sus.

DonOctavioDonOctavioabout 2 months ago

Great stuff, as usual. Loved the sexting. For me, hoping the next story involves someone else who noticed the curtain issue while Ken and Susan were going at it. I didn’t read that she turned the porch light back on, so…

Pharmdog7504Pharmdog7504about 2 months ago

Can’t wait for the next chapter. Anticipating what happens next.

omahakiwiomahakiwiabout 2 months ago

Great story and premise

AlexFourwaysAlexFourwaysabout 1 month ago

Great story and setup of the background. 5⭐ Thanks!

BTW did you forget to create a series for it, or is it awaiting moderation? I really value being able to click [ next part ] rather than having to click all the way back and find it. YMMV

albertaboyalbertaboy28 days ago

Good start, up to your usual standards

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Lovely premise.

Nice setup.

Sex is MUCH too automatic. Too mechanical. Too rushed.

She doesn't ask him if her tits are/feel as good as he imagined they would.

She doesn't comment on how he plays with them.

She doesn't ask him whether he's enjoying the tit-fuck. Or make any indication about how his cock feels to her between her tits.

Four stars. Close to five, but four.

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4-4-2024 I have now released Chapter Four of Sylvan Courtyard. It seems well received. Thank you all. The series set up for it seems gorked, as it has been stuck in moderation hell since the start. Sorry! ————— 3-23-2024 Chapter Two of my new series, Sylvan Courtyard, is now p...

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