All Comments on 'Sylvia's Mother'

by thelastenglishking

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Hardrider56Hardrider56over 1 year ago

Down and dirty is what we need at times. Maybe next time Jean will get naked and or suck off our hero.

Small_IslandSmall_Islandabout 1 year ago

I just read some of your 750 word mother-in-law vignettes from last year and they're good, but this one really hits the project mark. Well done getting an outlandish but conceivable scene introduced and completed within the limit.

Probus888Probus888about 1 year ago

Good short story - gets the job done in a minimum of words. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Prevarications? Whaaaat?

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