All Comments on 'Systems Engineer Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sorry but...

...it's got boring. Apart from being sent to fix an IT system there is no discernible story line.

Beatnic_jazzmanBeatnic_jazzmanabout 11 years agoAuthor
Plot

It's not meant to have a complex storyline, it's a whimsical piece where his expectation are turned upside down. If your looking for something more substantive read some of my other submissions, you'll find plenty of twists and turns in them.

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