All Comments on 'T.O.P.'

Oh WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was really great. If this is any thing to go on I really cant wait to read more stories by you.

MORE PLZ

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE IT WAS GREAT

MORE MORE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE GIVE ME MORE!!!!

Logdotzip sent me!

Wow and what a twist hehe I can't wait to read more either

Great story- maybe a bit unrealistic but entertaining.

I really love this. That asshole and that bitch deserve each other; However, if not for them, Travis and Dakota wouldn't be where they are. I loved that Travis actually cares about how D feels. Awww!

i'm guessing this was supposed to be over the top, tongue in cheek, ridiculous. as comedy dakota was almost entertaining- no one in their right mind would want anything like dakota anywhere near their cock. the only part of the story that maybe was halfway believable was when travis let dakota suck him off out of pity- but demanded a condom cause he didn't want that sluts drool all over his cock

get a life you sad anonymous person. if your going to bitch about a well wrote fantasy. at least have the balls to put your name to it.? however i found it slutty and fun well done you......

I've been in collaboration with another Lit author on here, young but quite talented. With our mutual friends, we've decided to create new, revised stories using his talents and my existing stories and ideas, so be sure to keep an eye out for him!

I can't even begin to descrbe how sweet and sexy that was. Please more! Amazing as always <3