All Comments on 'Tab To Pay'

I hope you keep making more maybe he can have a busty, young looking, grandma or Aunt as well, eh?

HOT STORY HOPE YOU BRING IN MOM AND HAVE A 3 WAY NEXT.

The story was good enough if that's all you are striving for then I guess you succeeded. definitely some problems with the whole rick/phillip name change. others as well but I'm going to let others comment on them...

It wasn't that great, but it wasn't the worst I have read either. Could've done alot better. A bit confusing too, to me. Better luck next time.

It was kinda boring and short. I guess it was okay.

Great story!! Made my dick throb.

When will we get the after work story?

I really enjoyed this story - made my pussy nice and wet - thanks

Bloody shit!Absolutly Fantastic.It made my penis go straight flying out of the world . Thanks

What a hot tale. Bro will have his gill later. I sure liked the theme. You need to do a better job of hooking the chapters together.

Will read more of your tales

far out this was one hot story. This made me so wet. Ive always dreamed of fucking my bros huge cock. must be awesome. masturbated so hard to this. One of the best ORGASMS EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks heaps

shit

Guys who are fond of shit hole play should always be ready to prove that they really love shit in every way

I started 2 wonder f there wuzza 2nd guy named Rick, but I guess that editing didn happn, eh? Good story. Glad Beth had black hair. Boobs a bit largish 4 me, but hey whatever when Sis is involved. I'll go see if prev story's still on site. This'n was pretty decent. Too short, however. Nice detail @ first; then 'Wham!' it was over, suk'd. Mebbe Mom lasted longer, eh?

Damn, Hope my niece reads this. Still hard just thinking about this one.

You made my throbbing cock ache for more, post more to it

it was straight to the point.Had me wishing i had a big brother to fuck me like that.

That was hot it made me wet.Add to it

Loved it. My pussy is still wet. Great story to masturbate to. Please write more stories to make me wet.

My pussy is soaking wet. This is a awesome story. It gave me one of my best orgasms yet. Please add more.

my pussy has never been so wet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i had a great orgasm the best one ever

please add more too this one

That was fuckentastic, can't wait to hear what happend after phill's work.

I would love it to be my daughter she has a wondeful body nice tits and ass.

Good story concept and the passion between them was clearly there but the story itself was just.... mediocre.

Love to own a bar and barter for sex.

also, my 2nd time and still good