All Comments on 'Tabby's Job'

by Tabby18lover

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Anakin20Anakin20over 19 years ago
really nice

It's been a long time, but it's so good to see you back

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful Read

I throughly enjoyed reading your story. It was great!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
your back!

I have enjoyed all your stories, glad to see you are writing again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
yummy stuff

omg that was so hot i ran to my room for my vibrator =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fine

It was a bit too long with all the sex and all that. It was more of having sex with everybody rather than incense. In fact the incense part was only like two paragraphs. Not that impressed. Wasn't very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
MY

PUSSY WAS SOOOO WET HOW CAN I GET IN THAT BUSSINESS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Delicious!

Great story - yummy & sexy! I just LOVE it whenever the girl is surprised to find out it's her own Daddy fucking her so damned good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent

Very well done. You are a very talented writer. There were only two very minor errors that would not have been caught by a spell checker; they are of no consequence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AS I WAS SAYING

Madam (madam)

get use to this lifestyle (used)

no where to be seen (nowhere)

long sheik dress (chic)

parting her leg (legs)

ensuite (en suite)

her bear shoulder (bare)

over weight (overweight)

lent (leaned)

straight a way (straightaway)

reached down (-with) to caress

bears mask and a rats (bear’s) (rat’s)

no where (nowhere)

a lions (lion’s)

maiden' (maiden's)

Lion (lion)

Panda (panda)

over dressed (over dressed)

red head (redhead)

nights work (night’s)

no where (nowhere)

it slide into her (slid)

tongue tied (tongue-tied)

Daddy's (daddy’s)

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