by Tabby18lover
I have enjoyed all your stories, glad to see you are writing again.
It was a bit too long with all the sex and all that. It was more of having sex with everybody rather than incense. In fact the incense part was only like two paragraphs. Not that impressed. Wasn't very hot.
Great story - yummy & sexy! I just LOVE it whenever the girl is surprised to find out it's her own Daddy fucking her so damned good!
Very well done. You are a very talented writer. There were only two very minor errors that would not have been caught by a spell checker; they are of no consequence.
Madam (madam)
get use to this lifestyle (used)
no where to be seen (nowhere)
long sheik dress (chic)
parting her leg (legs)
ensuite (en suite)
her bear shoulder (bare)
over weight (overweight)
lent (leaned)
straight a way (straightaway)
reached down (-with) to caress
bears mask and a rats (bear’s) (rat’s)
no where (nowhere)
a lions (lion’s)
maiden' (maiden's)
Lion (lion)
Panda (panda)
over dressed (over dressed)
red head (redhead)
nights work (night’s)
no where (nowhere)
it slide into her (slid)
tongue tied (tongue-tied)
Daddy's (daddy’s)