All Comments on 'Tabby's Little Brother'

good story just a little to long other thenthat great

not bad a good story i can get off three times but this story only once

I absolutely loved it, best story ever. I like really long sex stories.Please make a sequel.

Great story, long and sexy.It made me go off and did I enjoy it!

Write some more like this.

Mike

GRRRREAT STORY. My dick was so hard it was punished!!

Can't wait to read more of Tabby's adventures!

CANT WAIT TO READ MORE

This is a pretty painted fantasy by the author. It rates a 9 on a scale of 1 to 10.

You are a truly talented writer. This was an amazing story, it kept me with it to the end. I'm normally not a huge fan of long sex stories, but this was has changed that for good!

Derrick

I've read your stories and stumbled across your site. From now on I'll be a regular visitor. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Needs more detail. Scenes move too fast.

this was the best story i've read yet, its very detailed, and i was able to see it all in my head without trying. it was simply amazing

My sister and I both loved it.

Quite refreshing. I'm glad to see what today's youth are up to. My family were not so adventurous :(.. Plus MY sis is younger. I do like these long stories, though. Keep it up, man. Very sexxxy stuff!

Curious as to why the girls breasts were 'big' 36C breasts, though. Wouldn't just 36C breasts have sufficed? You were just repeating yourself, to tell the truth there. We all know that 36C breasts are large-ish. No need to tell us that, really. Now if you had said 'tiny' 36C breasts it would have been funny, at least! Oh well, whatever. I liked the story. The fact that one girl was carrying watermelons did kind of throw me off, but hey - that's how they grow 'em now, I guess, huh?

PS: I came about halfway through, but I read all of the way to the end, because I found the plot-line intriguing! Good job. Nice writing, except for the redundancy previously mentioned with the 'big' 36C breasts. LOL Well done, Sir!

11 out of 10 stars

Three thumbs way up

I really liked the fact that you did not shy away from the anal sex, either. Good on you, M8.

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good but it died when he called his friend and asked him to come over it was great until then you should have kept it just him and the four girls sorry i wasted my time reading this

Wtf the story was good but if u leave robert out,it will be better...overall it was nice!

Excellent story, absaloutely amazing.........10/1o even when he called robert, i thought you lucky lucky bastard lol ROBERT MUST OF GONE HOME THINKING i truely have the greatest best friend in the entire world for ringing me to share that, if this was real life and someone did that for you i think you'd end up being his best friend for life hahaha......awesome story from start to finish...IS IT JUST ME OR THE CHARACTER LANA, DARK HAIR when ever i read about her bits all i could picture was "lana lang" from "smallville" maybe its cause lana long from smallville ie kristinna kruek is fookin hot and a babe dammm i'd do her and chloe sullivan and louis lane hahaha.......back to the story, it was brilliant

This story was one of the best i've ever read with no doubt in my mind, and those two guys must be the luckiest sons a b*tches alive to have that happen to them, and that kind of tag sounds really really fun!!!

The story didn't have any real plot, but it was entertaining up until the little brother calls his friend. WTF?! That made no sense at all to me and killed any enjoyment of the story. What's with these beta and gamma males in the stories? Ugh!

this was one of the best ive read and I wish this happened to me

Once you introduced the brother's friend it ruined it for me. Great story befor that though!

Story was going along fine until the stuttering retard fucked his sister up the ass with no lube, not very believable, then it got worse and went totally downhill, NO GUY fucking all those girls is going to call his fucking buddy over to share, NEVER HAPPEN! Mine, all mine! Wouldnt even tell my buddy.

Very hot and exciting until James' cock MAGICALLY has enough energy for like the fifth consecutive erection in a 30 minute time span. Also the imagery is very hot for the first 2 times but after time 3, 4, 5 the adjectives become way too repetitive.

Shit

Nice to see the guys get their way once in a while. The tag/chasing scene was truly inspired and hot. "Let's go find us another one", etc-the thrill of the chase and conquest, the way sex actually happens in Nature! A few minor errors here and there, and a little too good to be true, but a lot of fun. Great story!

nice

While reading this story, I began to yank off slowly. Since it was so arousing, around the mid-way point, I couldn't hold off any longer and exploded ever so nicely. Thanks for getting me going. Will enjoy reading more or your stories in the future.

refer to the girls as "bitch" and "slut"? It's the indication of a very immature writer.

You lost me when he called his buddy Robert to share. I didn’t even finish reading the story