All Comments on 'Table for Two Ch. 02: Revelations'

MORE! 5*

MORE, PLEASE!

While this seems to be a never ending theme, the story is just as interesting as all it's previous incarnations. Okay, you've set the hook. Now bring in the fish.

Great chapter, ST...

It’s fun that all your stuff is interwoven

But it really drags things out when the characters have to discuss it so much

Half of this installment was fluff

"Stay on target, Red leader!" This one is pure gold! Thanks, ST!

Good story. But I was a little surprised by the conversation with Jacob Greene. First, wouldn't the MC be concerned that Greene would warn his daughter about the hidden cameras in the house, and not show him the video? He didn't even ask Greene not to mention to her that the house contained cameras. And the statement "I could tell he was slightly disappointed in his daughter", and Greene asking the MC to go easy on his "little girl" seemed inappropriate. Greene should already seen enough from what the MC showed him to be shocked and thinking in terms of disowning his daughter, with his history of betrayal by this group and his background knowledge. But overall, a good story.

I know there's a lot of work done for the setup, but it just feels like filler, especially with retreading old ground that previous stories in this universe have already gone over several times. More time spent on the characters (especially the offenders) in the current story might have been better, since right now they're the regular over-the-top evil caricatures.

God, l love these stories, they are just so wicked.

Please rush the next chapter, l cannot wait to read it.

Well done ST1956, another brilliant success

Scores 5/5

Damn, damn, damn!

Where is part 3?

I'd really like to see some new original ideas from ST. He's pretty much beat MMAS/Alpha Sector theme to death. Sorry if this offends you ST, just my opinion.

This website is weird. Other authors pull this same thing, multiple parts, similar plot lines and get down-voted and trolled to hell. Where are the angry readers demanding to FTDS? Where are the ones calling for the author's blood because it's not quite up to their demeaning standards or same cookie cutter story template?

Seriously, I'd like to know. This story is mediocre, not Saddletramp's best work yet it is rated highly. I just don't get it.

So well applied were the cliches on page one I walked away from a boilerplate "great" story.

Sounds kinda like the wife is being played. May be wrong but Alan seemingly is real player.

Same story, different day. Boring and predictable.

MOAR! MOAR! I'm luvin it!

Great build up into part 2. Keep up the great writing and thanks for the writing.

This is getting real good.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Excellant as always.

Damn, can't wait for the next installment of this story. Great job, ST--you're really nailing it here!

Mate this is excruciating waiting for the next episode in this saga.

Such a simple mind.

A good read. It sounds like 'Joe Friday' from the old tv series Dragnet. Just the facts, ma'am.

Can't wait for more!!!

God dammit ST1956....dude you simply can't let your army of fans linger in erotic literature no man's land! For the love of Mike, give us the next installment muy pronto....please

Great stuff. Somehow stories in this universe are very quick reading. That’s a good thing, much more entertaining than tales with minimal dialogue.

Great read so far. Look forward to the next chapter.

Love this.. Burn The Bitch and her cronies

Once again , you knock it outta the park.

Regards

Stiixx

Always interesting and well written.

The bromance is strong in this one.

Fantastic, but then again would be surprised if it wasn't. Looking forward to reading the next chapter

Can’t believe you just when it was getting juicy lol😂😂😂😂😂😂😂. Anyway fantastic piece of writing from yourself can’t wait for your next chapter lol . Just don’t wait so long you superb writer you lol 😂

I stopped resding this is an old story line used many times on this site

EXCELLENT, as always. That's why you're the master! Sammie slut pissed in the wrong bastard's corn flakes. She and her cohorts may be going up schitt's creek, with no locomotion!

cant wait for more!!!

Great story well written. “As usual “

2 part series? I thought that meant it had a conclusion?

Thank you, you saved my day, literally speaking! 5*!!!

This is a good one ST. Sorry you had some issues, hope all is well these days!

ST sorry to here you've had some issues.

On the UP SIDE this story is amazing; an "on the edge of the chair" thriller.💥💯💥💫

Can't wait for part 3!!!!!👊👍

Like a JimBob44 story (that’s a compliment), with cameos by so many characters from the Saddletramp universe. Entertaining so far, with a good build up of tension. I look forward to the rest of the story. Thanks

You have to be a really committed fan to keep up with saddltramp’s imagination and storytelling. I’m definitely a committed fan.

This may be the most comically absurd thing I’ve ever read: “She was murdered. By Mona Larsen. I was told she had some kind of poison capsule in her neck. She supposedly got a message from Mona that her services were no longer required. That triggered a hypnotic suggestion that she slap her neck. When she did, the poison capsule broke and she was dead before her body hit the floor.” Hahaha! This deserves an award for Most Ridiculously Convoluted Way To Kill Someone. Hahahaha.

Another great cliffhanger.

I love you're writing, but I am confused why you are writing the same story again? You've already told an almost identical tale in "A RIGOROUS JOB INTERVIEW - A SEQUEL"

Ok, I'll say it. FTDS!!! What? No one else wants to say it?

After seeing the rating, I was disappointed after the read. Still, a good effort.

Simply fantastic, thank you.

We expect over-the-top from Mr Tramp, but what we also get is that All Women Are Stupid.

Allison is a lawyer, right? As an officer of the court, and the person who set up Samantha's alimony payments from her first husband, she would have been required to notify his employer when Samantha remarried. She also knows of a thumb drive full of child porn. If she does not report that to the police, she's liable.

Lawyers can't be stupid, because stupid people can't get into law school, but Allison has put her law license, and her freedom, at stake to fraudulently accuse some men of possession of child pornography.

Why would Allison risk that? What does she gain in forcing years of extra alimony from Samantha's ex-husband that makes it worth the risk? It would have been smarter for her to advise Samantha to shack up rather than remarry: that way, unless the alimony is structured so that shacking up also ends it -- and that can happen -- she can continue to receibe the alimony legally.

I love your tales of espionage and dramatic action all with an erotic undertone , truly entertaining and exciting !!!

Please finish the story!

@ReedRichards, there is a huge percentage of very stupid people in law school. Besides that, greed makes people do amazingly foolish things. Google "hubris".

This storyline, the writing is excellent as always. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings which I hope will be coming real soon. Saddletramp your stories never disappoint and this one is no exception. Well done 5-stars+++++

A terrific story. As usual!

My favorite author.

Please, please,please. don't publish a story until you have the whole story. This one is excellent so far, but there are a lot of unfinished, and probable will remain unfinished stories on this site. I would love to give this the 5 it deserves, but can not and will not rate a partial story.

Waiting with baited breath for the rest of it. 5stars as usual. Thanks!!! Hoggypig out...

FTDS

Part 3 has been submitted... Apologies for the long wait. Life and all that...

The only downside of this story, so far, is the long, very looooooong wait between chapters. At least, SDT1956 is aware of it, so that's that.

Except for that, a terrific tale thus far.

First time I have commented her but I thoroughly enjoy your work and thank you for the time you put into them

Man the wait is killing me!!

I would prefer if authors would complete their stories and submit the chapters on consecutive days instead of the long drawn out process.

I haven't seen part 3 submitted yet

Where's the rest of it?

Cinco Estrellas! I love it so far! YOU NEED TO TELL HARRY IN VA THAT HE WOULDN'T RECOGNIZE A GOOD STORY IF HE HAD IT STUCK IN HIS RECTUM 117 TIMES!

Love the story. AAAAA+++++

*****This is my kind of read. Damn this is very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

I love it. It's very entertaining and full of suspense, like a good old fashioned movie. ST, are you sure you're not in the screen actors guild? Just asking as I could sit down for 2 hours or more and watch this on the big screen. Thank You for sharing it with us. I gave it 5 stars.

Mickey Spillane - get outta here. There's a new kid in town.

Keep 'em comin'.

It just gets juicier and juicer. Keep it coming.

If the former wife was from money, the plot just doesn't work. What is the (implied) motivation? I must be missing something. As a reader I feel very disconnected from the story line.

The problem with the evil arch nemesis narrative or in this case evil bitch organisation is they are obvious as fuck and dumb as shit. Added to the fact former special agent shit for brains marries some random chick with no background check and absolutely no attempt to protect himself what a joke🤣🤣🤣🤣

To Hemmingsway: Why does the 'former' wife, who is from money, do what she has done?

Because sick twisted people just do.

So far fetched , just like a kids comic strip but funny and really quite good….

I remember this now. Absurd but fun!

Could have been a good story but all the MMAS stuff is ridiculous.

Yeah, at this point in time the detractors are out in force after reading this story. Why? Well they read it. Why? It was free and posted here in the LW section of LIT.

If all you want to do is read a story, that is free, by the way, then why tear it apart, Why read it if you think it is a piece of shit? It is certainly better than the thousands of 'FREE' movies that are streaming all over the internet and TV movie channels. There are no bad actors in this story. Did you read the author’s disclaimer at the beginning? Probably not.

This is the author’s story; it comes from his head. Authors write stories for their own enjoyment and ours. It takes talent to do that. In this story there are dumb good people, and even dumber bad people. We all love to see cheating wife get hers and the asshole gets his balls kicked in and the good guy kisses his horse and rides of into the sunset.

The story was entertaining and then a bunch critics come along and say it’s a bunch of shit. Well, in my humble opinion our author is a pretty good writer. The story is entertaining and there is a modicum of truth in this story and many others her on LIT. There are man hating bitches in this world, and there women hating assholes in this world, and there women who think they are men, and men who think they are women, and some people who are not even sure what they are. Don’t even get me started on politics and religion in real life, stranger than fiction? You bet.

Our author has written a good story with action and the bad guys get their due. It was entertaining and that’s why I read stories and I’m cheap, that’s why I read free stories.

I always appreciate the author’s efforts even the obviously amateur, (most found here are amateur), authors here on LIT and other sites. The less than good authors I try and encourage them and point out some of the really good authors and their stories for them to read and see how good authors write.

So in the words of one of the better authors on LIT “LIGHTEN THE FUCK UP” and enjoy the stories for what they are, writers enjoying writing and giving us something to read. The authors here on LIT, especially in this section of LW, have a lot of guts along with varying degrees of talent, and the stories are all FREE! DUH! Just sayin'.

So generally love your stuff...except for your unholy obsession about putting mushrooms in lasagna. Will say on this read through I noticed a decently big plot hole. If the cops found out the child pornography was put on his phone after he was unconscious...that would mean they know the ex and the dude she was shacking up with were in possession of the child pornography...and they all go down. They know the wife has to be involved to unlock the phone so she is complicit in multiple crimes there. Anywho keep on trucking.

Mmmmmm Lasagna with Italian Sausage, Mushrooms and Jalapeno Peppers.

That's some dirty crap that's going on there. I'm kind of guessing, but I'm thinking that Mike will come out the winner on this one. Like he says, he doesn't like to loose an argument. It may just take a bit of doing on his part. Good story and well written.

Excellent! Another 5 BIG ONES!

Five stars.

The pot gets hotter but it’s not boiling yet. Maybe soon. Great story, ‘Tramp, keep it coming.

bit of a nit pick, but...page one. Made it safe, or put on the safety? Bit of a difference between condition 2 and 3...