All Comments on 'Table for Two Ch. 02: Revelations'

Superbly written.... Your writing voice is improving with everything you publish. Excellent!!! I can't wait for part 3. 5+++/5!!

An fun tale..

A great second chapter with some very interesting ties to previous stories. Looking forward to Ch 3

This is like the 117th time that this particular author has written a story just like This one.

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We get it. You hate women.

You have never had sex with a woman you've had paid as an escort

Great but please don't keep us waiting for part3

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I will withhold any further comment till it's complete, but so far I'm loving it.

Good story so far!

It getting good hopefully part 3 comes faster than a virgin

I wanted to like this but it was just too…easy.

She married the one man on the entire planet who is a “retired federal agent specializing in divorce and abused husbands”. One who has access to a lot of money, has a genius female lawyer who hates cheaters, has his home wired for surveillance where all the conversations conveniently take place, has access and support from a federal task force that deals with this kind of bullshit while the gold digging exwife, her new lover and her lawyer have only themselves.

Seriously, it’s like you telling us the smallest kid in class tried to punch Mike Tyson and the Tyson AND his boxing friends best the shit out of the kid.

It’s. Too. Fucking. Easy.

5* This is moving along nicely. Glad you are back. Hope that whatever it was that you had to deal with is all settled.

Meh....

Great! As always. Looking forward to the next chapter.

No shark attorney could be as stupid as this Alice is...I mean they could be...but they wouldn't have lasted long. The ex is paying a mortgage that doesn't exist? That shit wouldn't fly.

Another superb story! Can't wait for the next chapter. An easy 5 stars.

Who reads this shit? Is this porn for the incel crowd?

this is getting good

Excellent chapter!

5

So far, so good.

Looking forward to Part III

Cmon saddletramp where is the next chapter?? 😂😂

I wish I hadn't read this. Every time I start to fall asleep I slap my neck!

I have been amused and enjoying the MMAS stories for a while now. Took them as over the top fiction until I recently started to wonder how almost overnight and across the entertainment and advertising industries how could it be possible that all companies could get on the anti man bandwagon at the same time? Check the managing execs of Disney and you start to get a clue

Keep em coming ST... 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love your story but all the task force stuff begin to be boring, it take all the story when the cheating is just put aside

This task force storyline is getting old. Do you not get bored of writing it? Same old same old with you every time. Same bullshit about the man being raped in a divorce and child porn being used, 1*

I tried, I really did, but broke in :

"That triggered a hypnotic suggestion that she slap her neck."

Hope the others enjoyed it.

Loved this one...can't wait to see the sequels... One of your best...

u need to get smarter villains

A lot of skimming needed, really dont need to read something being explained to someone in a drawn out dialogue that has just been explained to someone else

Nice. I am enjoying this one.

good story

can't wait to see how this all plays out. Great story

Another great chapter. Enjoying the story immensely. Looking forward to the next installment. 5 stars that was well earned. Thanks for the offering.

ST, you know we're waiting anxiously for the next chapter... Well done, Sir!

This kind of thing is really irritating. I rarely start a multi-part story, because of one underlying reason. Each part, when it finally arrives, has been interrupted by thirty, forty or more other stories I have read in the meantime. No continuity. To make this even worse, there was no summary of the first part, even a couple paragraphs, in other words, just dropping me into the story cold. (The last paragraphs of the first part don't count.)

I started Part One this time, because of the author. But again, it offended me because of disruptions and the lack of a summary of Part One. I scored this Part Three Stars, because that is the most I could in all conscience give it. Now, I can count, once again, on an interrupted sequence, broken up by numerous other stories read in the interim. PLEASE introduce Part Three with a brief summary!

JPB

Outstanding as usual. Always look forward to your stories. Consider you the best writer on literotica. Keep writing...

Excellent writing, dripping and oozing for MORE.

Interesting, where's the next chapter? I like this story.

The writing is good, but drama is missing when the wife is so totally evil and when husband has such lethal resources.

always a great read

"Give me a tire iron. I can use that to break through this door." - If he can show that his office was broken into, he would have a valid claim that anything found was planted.

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"No. I quit taking those today," - While it may not be impossible for her to get pregnant right away, I believe you have to be off the pill one to three months to get pregnant.

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Surely his employer has the bank account information in order to make the deposits,

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Surely the videos they already have are enough to send them away?

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Kind of loses the dramatic tension when the MC has just about unlimited resources at his disposal.

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@buzzsawlenny, I think you mean Allison. Alice is the husband's lawyer. She wasn't the ex's lawyer. Now that she knows, and IS his lawyer, she's going to claw back that money.

It looks like ST is back up to speed and on another roll. 5-stars!

ARGHHHH!!!! Best MMAS spin-off in a while and I have to wait for the next installment again - you're killing me ST! LOL 5*

This is a great story. Cant wait for the next part. As they down South. This anit bad buddy!!!!

Magnificent story teller and author.All your stories have me hooked.Very very talented

Then I copied the two videos I downloaded to a thumb drive, adjusted my "out of office" email auto-response message, then packed up my stuff.

Just a dumb question, but why didn’t he just do it when he was in the hotel room?

go for it

Love these stories from saddletramp with strong interest in mmas organisation. They say it could not happen but have a look at the sisterhood and how they have managed to get themselves into the workforce of the public service and now manage to control a lot of goverment departments with there sexist ideology. All the while claiming an imbalance of gender in management. Some departments are 70% female. Just saying and dont start me on these woke idiots.

A seatbelt doesn't cut it, I needed a five point harness to hold on through this. Looking forward to next chapter. A great story. Looking at some of the other comments, it is interesting the an entire society can go anti- male in a short time. Please may this remain fiction.

More please. This is great.

Thoroughly entertaining! And isn’t that the point?

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Yeah, sure….our MC is both a retired agent experienced in fighting tne witches’ coven….AND he has access to the existing network of legal and forensic and security assets with which to fight the coven! So what?

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My head scratcher concerns “Pop” — how could he NOT know about his daughter given her associations AND the circumstances of her first divorce? THAT doesn’t compute.

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Time to guess….Allison is the new head witch….Samantha is just a narcissistic bitch Allison is using. Again.

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But ignore the critics! This is just a fun genre read! Can’t wait until the next installment!

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5 *****

keep going and i was right the task force is going to get involved 5 stars

Hope all is well with you. Thanks for another great chapter

Hope you keep the additional chapters coming FAST! Thanks.

Another great story line! Everything seems to be going the protagonist's way, so a plot twist must be around the corner...

Loving this story.

Enjoyable but getting repetitive with that task force etc.

I enjoy how you develop your characters and plots. My only complaint is the time between installments.

MMAS stories are almost as prolific as the last day of February! Still enjoyable though so keep it coming. Thanks again!

Two chapters down, and we're still doing ok. I AM having to shut down a lot of 'aw, come on' thoughts in my head, along with a lot of 'wait a minute' suspicions. The suspension of reason is quite helpful when reading the Tramp's stories.....

Is always interesting please continue and stop short ignore the rest the more detail the better.

You better put out part 3 quickly.

Always worth the wait! Looking forward to the next part!

I don't normally like stories about government agents and secret organizations, but this one is really very good. It's well written. I'm enjoying it.

Wow, lots of old strings being pulled into this saga.

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The deep dive into Allison will be the key to discovery just what is really going on. Mike needs to hack into the hidden account and get all the $$$ moved, legally or not if he intends to recoup and of the 1stEX over payments putting the screws to that trio. Then continue to dig to the bottom of who is behind Allison and the trio - this trail of woe goes back ~11yrs now.

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Should be a fun saga to follow AND so what if MMAS is old or renamed the 'sisterhood' it still plays well.

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5*****, Hooyah, Salutes...

Love the atory, and the tie in with prior characters...

Hopefully you'll keep this story going until 2023.

I know it’s your story and your ‘universe’ but even so, I think it’s worth noting that a woman that’s been on birth control pills for a significant amount of time doesn’t just ‘become fertile and ready to have a baby put inside her’ because she stopped taking the pills that same morning. For most women, it would take several months, perhaps even longer, before her hormone levels returned close to normal for her to start ovulating again.

Thank you for Chapter 2. 5 BIG and FAT BLAZING STARS!

Every morning I read the recent comment section of the Loving Wives Stories Hub page, one, to see what old stories are out there that someone thinks are deserving of comment; and two to see which of the current crop of stories I want to read first. In the three years, I've been a Lit reader, Saddletramp has captured 12 of the 15 spots. I guess that's next on my read list.

This task force stuff is getting old..... Same story over and over. If you have to rehash this story yet again please make it shorter and get to the point. The secretly evil wife is really over the top, yet again, and REALLY no longer remotely believable.

Love it! So nice to have another Saddletramp series!

Hope things are going better for you can't wait for more

Superb story - can't wait for the next chapter. It just grabs your attention and wont let go!

Great story keep it going it ould turn into a long runner

Another masterpiece from the great ST! 5 stars all the way!

Okay, I get this is your universe, and everything is possible in it, so I'm not supposed to look for realism...

But this is not how this works! This is not how ANY of this works!

I mean, seriously? They found Child Pornogrophy on her Ex-Husband's phone. They KNEW it was placed there after he was knocked out, and before he woke up. So, there is only a very limited number of people who could've planted it there, and only two with a motive. His angry wife and her lover. WHY did they never follow up on that!? It's Child-Porn, for christ's sake. Your MC is a former Fed, the people who deal with that stuff, he should know that!

Than the Deep-Fake photos. There is NO WAY to prove anything is faked once they're printed. You'd need the original files, before they went through a compression-algorithm to turn them into JPGs or whatever they are now.

And why would E-Mailing him the Child-Porn prove anything? Why would they even CONSIDER it, after they already realized he has the full resources of the fucking FBI behind him?

Could you please decide if your Antagonists are smart enough to get away with this kind of shit for YEARS, or if they are as stupid as you depict them right now?

How in the hell could they not realize they forgot about the Scars on his Leg!? If someone enters a room with a cane, that is normalle THE FIRST thing people notice. The cane and the limp. This would be THE MOST prevalent feature of his entire appearance. How did they not think about that!?

I can’t wait for the next writing. Please don’t wait so long. You do excellent work.. David….

Better than chapter 1 and that one was great. Thank you ST!

Another great story, sorry to hear of your difficulties, hope that they resolve themselves quickly for you. You are a talented writer and I enjoy your stories very much. Looking forward to your next submission, please keep up the great work!

Intense excitement. Better get that next chapter published for sure, and quickly!!!!!

How long till the next chapter or should I ask how many weeks. Get it written all in full then release a chapter a day . How hard is that ? Other wise it is a good read.

Wonderful..can't wait for more

Thank You Very Much Mr SaddleTramp1956 - tho this story reads more like a James Bond Movie instead erotic fiction I love it! Pure Greatness to the Max! Whoa, True to Form ST delivers again and again. On Top of a Fantastic Plot there aren't noticeable mispellings or punctuation mistakes. Five stars to Mr SaddleTramp. Please keep them coming. This story is keeping me on the edge of my seat. Such an Evil Evil Bad Guy Wife. Holy Moly I've had bad & evil wives before but Nothing like this fortunately! Great Job as usual ST. Thank You so much!

I don’t care much about the MC. He will be alright with that support network. I really really really want to see some justice for Alvin.

Those damn cliff hanging endings!

Anxiously awaiting the "rest of the story". Thanks

This is setting up to be epic. 5/5

You write the most interesting short stories, about a page, maybe two. But I'm puzzled why you hide the dramatic compelling plot issues among the most bland pointless dithering garbage dialogue, stage props, and rabbit trail contemplation. It makes skipping over the junk pile not only obligatory but necessary if you want to stay on track with the actual plot.

So here we have another aardvark marriage. He's been married to this animal for years, knows her intimately, deeply, her thoughts, her attitudes, her values, her mannerisms, her virtue, her strengths and weaknesses. Then, SHAZAM, he wakes up one morning and realizes that, Somehow, he's been married to an aardvark all these years, a cheating miserable deceitful murderous monster aardvark, but he never knew. These fucking aardvarks are almost as sneaky as Martians! And then there's his father-in-law, who apparently didn't realize he had raised and nurtured an aardvark as a daughter. I wonder how he knew it was a female? Maybe that story is over in the Incest Category? Yeah, its that ridiculous, and laughable. A comic book writer would be embarrassed by how preposterous are this plot and characters. "But Its Fiction!!" Yeah, so is Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. At least that author had the honesty to include a secret potion to explain the extremes in personality and behavior.

But these comments do not mean your story is not entertaining and fun to read. OK, its tedious to read, but still interesting. I can't wait to read how the bitches and the assholes all end up punished and suffering. Uh, OK again, guess I will have to wait. A while, apparently. But hey, at least I'm getting all that I paid for. Thanks for the effort.

Thanks for another great series!

The first chapter kind of had my interest, but this one just fell back into another retread of the task force stuff. Same scenario with a couple of different names.

You've got me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. Well done and thank you

Love it, can't wait to see how you fry them all!

You’re killing me ST!!!!! I can’t wait for the rest!

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Good to see the continuing saga of this story, looking forward to the next installment or the end whichever you write. Please do not take forever to write

Nice story , what I do not understand is as a top Investigator for a federal agency who killed people. He marries this co women and knows she was married before and doesn’t do a background check. This doesn’t compute with his personality. Everyone today needs a prenup and a background check before tying the knot!!

Nice fantasy story. I wish you did more research on facts that work. Her first husband is pretty dumb paying that sluts blackmail. He could have googled and found out she remarried. Also sold the condo. Those child porn pictures were done after he was beaten up. The chump had to pay all that money and never did any investigation or higher a good lawyer or go to the DA to state his case. Then she marries this top investigator who doesn’t do a background check on this women knowing she was married before. And the stepfather know all this. If you could do better with your facts you would be a great writer. Nothing jells in this story but it is interesting non the less.

I'm hooked. When will the next installment be released?

Isn't that privileged conversation with her lawyers?