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Click hereAs Emily enjoyed the warm softness of her sister's right breast on her left cheek, the nipple still hard, she asked, "You don't mind if I relax here?"
Another round of quiet giggles from Stephanie made her smile.
"Em, after that I don't mind absolutely anything," Stephanie whispered in return, "That was, just wow."
"Better than yesterday?" Emily asked, referring to her sister's portrait-drawing masturbation session.
"Look who's fishing for compliments," her sister playfully replied, "But yeah, no contest. I swear to god, I'd do just about anything now."
Emily's heart skipped a beat.
"Anything?"
- COMMENTS
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthorsaphhia> thank you, that is a lot of dedication. I'm glad you liked it that much. For myself, I'm looking forward to the next Kissing Cousins.
Saphhiaover 6 years agoThis is the second time I have read this chapter, but I love the climax so much, I simply couldn’t resist.
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthordarkdance69> Thank you for the high praise. I'm doing my best to get the next/final chapter out ASAP.
darkdance69over 6 years agoGreat character development, believable people all the way through the story and engaging (and hawt) story. It's to bad only 5 🌟's are available to award. I hope the next chapter is coming soon!
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthorWhiteNyte> Thank you for your praise, I enjoyed reading it.
As for your questions - that's a broad topic and I can only give a broad answer that I fear will let you unsatisfied - there is no secret trick, no magic bullet. I read a lot, I think a lot, I write a lot. Experience enters into everything you do, and obviously you have to care about/enjoy something if no one's paying you for it. Sometimes it works out, sometimes it doesn't. You learn from it and try again.
I wish I could give a better answer than that.
WhiteNyteover 6 years agoYour story is an amazing feat of sexy taboo that you put together so well I have been reading it over and over I cant help myself. I'm wondering how you accomplished this and i'm sure the real world gets in the way a lot. What do you use for inspiration? Experience? Other stories? I can only speculate but that's why I'm asking. I don't want to anymore. Do you ever find yourself getting riled up when writing? I'm not much of a writer so I don't have a clue what it's like... It seems impossible when I think about it. That's why I see your masterpiece and am amazed how you fit personality with situations so well knit together. You have a fan who will always read what you post. Just letting you know ;) keep writing. Your good at it!
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthorlast anon> Thank you for the praise and congrats on making the commenting plunge. Most authors enjoy and appreciate feedback, I certainly do.
As for the ETA for the last chapter - admittedly I am a bit behind schedule. If this was a random chapter it would've been out by now. But it's the final one and is longer. But it's coming along and I hope to be done within a couple of weeks, say 2-3 weeks, also depending on editing and review.
Anonymousover 6 years agoHey there, this is my first ever comment I actually will have posted on this site. First of all: massive congratulations on your story, it's been a blast reading and certainly has become one of my favourite "long" stories. As you mentioned in another comment you were looking for around the end of october, how far do you think you are currently? Not trying to pressure you, instead take as much time as you need, just curious.
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthorlast anon> I have a few pages of what you might call alternate timelines - unfinished subplots which didn't make it to publication. They didn't make it because they were going nowhere, or just weren't good enough. I'm unlikely to ever publish those though, they don't fit the story or characters.
Anonymousover 6 years agoHey Jessica,
Do you plan on writing alternate timelines? Like, ones in which other characters of the story get a chance to be pairs or at least fuck with the girls?
I was thinking about this during the counselling and Emily's fantasies with Jenniffer, and also how Sam could join in a threesome.
love the story so much keep going xoxo
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthorprongzy> If all goes well, I'm hoping to be done by end of October. Sorry for the delay and me killing you. I'm doing my best, thanks for your comment.
Anonymousover 6 years agoDo you have any indication when you'll publish chapter 11? You're killing me with the wait. KILLING ME!
JessicaSover 6 years agoAuthorBiPoly9> Thank you for your comment and your praise. I appreciate it and am doing my best to deliver the next (likely final) chapter ASAP.
BiPoly9over 6 years agoJessica S:
I enjoyed this story very much. You have a mastery of subtlety and nuance, in addition to keeping the reader engaged. When Emily started dating Stephen, I said "NO!" out loud at 1:00 AM, to no one in particular. When Emily broke it off with Stephen, I was relieved. Very clever way of getting to the crux of the story - by having Sam text the wrong person. Thank you for this wonderful work of Fiction. I anxiously await the next chapter, and more works from you.
Respectfully;
BiPoly9
