by JT_Stone
This author has done a good job of starting this potential series. However, obviously he/she has no intention of developing it. Hopefully the author will let another person develop and finish this well written story. For what it is worth, this initial entry is a 5 star story.
Are you ever going to write more of this, or, are we just hung out to dry...
Hot story. well paced and nicely imagined. Ignore the detractors keep writing. Please edit for continuity. 5 star!
i loved it, i want more of this so hot and really well done , sounds real
Why change the mothers and sons names ? Hope you keep the names as Nancy and Josh now, or it could end up a bit confusing. That said, this as the makings of a good sexy story.