by geronimo_appleby
This is not my type of story. I really don't need any psychodrama. I'm 76. I was in combat in both Korea and Vietnam. I've been married four times. Once for 39 years. Once for 29 days. I've already seen all of that I need. I don't require stories to end with happy endings, but they should be at least satisfying. This story was not satisfying for me. Maybe as a longer piece it would work better. That being said, keep on writing. I'm sure the market exists for your work.