All Comments on 'Tainted'

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JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxabout 11 years ago
Och aye

Well written, good structure. Loved the accent.

papabear555papabear555about 11 years ago
dark and violent

This is not my type of story. I really don't need any psychodrama. I'm 76. I was in combat in both Korea and Vietnam. I've been married four times. Once for 39 years. Once for 29 days. I've already seen all of that I need. I don't require stories to end with happy endings, but they should be at least satisfying. This story was not satisfying for me. Maybe as a longer piece it would work better. That being said, keep on writing. I'm sure the market exists for your work.

teedeedubteedeedubabout 11 years ago
Wow

That one got me. Good story. Well written.

Thank You....

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