All Comments on 'Take a Picture'

You had unprotected sex with someone you didn't know? Shame on you. LOL. Again a rather humourous story and a fine effort. I am looking forward to your next posting.

Loved the armpit licking - HOT!

Loved the subplot, which only added to the story, which was hot!

It had everything you could ask for. Excellent work!

This made my day!!

David,

Another home run. I enjoyed every part of this story and hope to see more submissions by you. Thanks for a great story.

Bob

This story had everything you could ask for - sex, humor and an actual plot with a fascinating ending. Well done!

and that you lamented the low number of readers.

It was their loss. people who like an intriguing story should find it.

with the little twist at the end I am still wondering what actually happened.

was the bartender her stepfather?

what happened when he drove back out there a few days later?

What a little uncut diamond, not my fav erotic style. but the period it fitted into sparkled, leaving you wanting more just like a good dessert one tiny spoonful more and it would be ruined.

Strange to think it was over 7 years between comments.

Cool . . . . had to read the author's favorite story.

Wore me out, would have at forty years too.