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All Comments on 'Take Me Back to Eden'

by UnbrokenSage

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LT_BookwormLT_Bookworm8 months ago

Woo boy, this is a punch to the gut of a beginning. I want to see more, but I hope to deity that this guy gets all the love and professional help he's gonna need after this.

aldolinoaldolino8 months ago

Let's see where this leads to.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Don't know what to think, need to read the next chapter to be able to form an opinion (as long as there's enough of the story in it)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wow. Not my usual cup of tea, but you have me intrigued.

Technically very good, so five stars.

I’m not sure that I’ll come back, but maybe…

WillmottWillmott8 months ago

This shit should be shown in flashback, not in media res introduction

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