All Comments on 'Take Me For a Ride'

I enjoy the passion and attention to detail in your writing. I especially liked how you took your time in detailing the undressing of the characters. It is something that is often overlooked.

Great job!

good story but I thing it would have been a little more sexy if he had take your clothes off and describe you breast as he did

good story but I thing it would have been a little more sexy if he had take your clothes off and describe you breasts and nipples as he did

This story threatens readers with cliche, but once they take the plunge and try it out, they'll be mighty surprised. I loved the way you detailed her kissing his neck - I don't think I've read any stories on LE that do that, and it was great. I particularly loved this line: "Velvety smooth with steel underneath, it always fascinated me how a man's cock felt." You write very realistically. I did find the flow a bit choppy at times, and suggest that you use contractions, for example, turning "it is" into "it's," or "he would" into "he'd." That would add to the reality, IMHO.

Overall, very hot!

just plug in and jump start. TK U MLJ LV NV

His eyes 👀 are dark brown when he raises his sunglasses 😎 but green on the rock.