All Comments on 'Take Me, Tom Pt. 02'

OK but a bit mawkish. Incidentally, the first thing most people want to do when they wake up in the morning is take a piss.

Fantastic story. Loving these two as they reconnect. I am hoping he will transfer to her town and they will stay together in a romantic relationship. telling the kids will be interesting and will they spill to their dad? Please keep going.

Thanks, Frankie. I appreciate your time to write a comment. I shall be addressing both of your comments. I have 7 chapters ready so, hopefully, we'll get an answer soonish. Regards...

Anonymous.

Mawkish? Hmm, perhaps but...I'm looking for 'romantic' rather than mawkish. Must try harder, I guess. And yes, your point about 'first thing in the morning' is a good point. Lol

Again, I'll run through what I have and make any adjustments.

Nonetheless, thanks for taking the time to read it. For better or for worse, I have a few more chapters ready so...

What a great follow up to the original story. Cant wait to see where this journey leads these 2. Excellent writing and loving these 2 characters.

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This was a long time coming! Thank you for a great continuation. Will there be more?

Middleson ( yeah, you know who you are!) Thanks for the kind words. It's much appreciated..

Lovedefacto; Yeah, it did take a while! I have six chapters ready to submit but am only uploading them every few days. Thanks for your interest!

More please. Thank you.

Well written sex scenes, but I like good relationship development undertones in these stories as well. I know you're likely "getting there" but a little more depth intertwined with th sex would bring the series to the next level. 4*

Very good story line. I love how brothers and sisters gives in to their inhibitions for one another. Look for more.

Instead of just rating this another "5", I wanted to leave a few lines of praise. There is no criticism I can make for this story. The story line, the character and relationship development, the heat of the sex content and of course, who well you relayed it to us, your audience, was magnificent!

Keep 'em coming!!

X-Man

X-Man; Thanks for the kind comments. There's quite a bit more, as the storyline has developed a bit. I'm just pleased this one piqued your interest. Thanks for taking the time...

Oooh! Great naughty hole action in the shower! Eating a nice peachy ass is just the best, isn't it?

Hey, sometimes you need a piss first thing, other times you have morning wood and just want your cock gobbled!