All Comments on 'Take Only as Directed Ch. 06'

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EpixrysonEpixrysonabout 12 years ago
Thank you *****

I am loving where this story is going ,or should I say where Janie is going.

Somewhere with a plot ,combined with your excellent writing.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

rollo_bluerollo_blueabout 12 years ago
Great stuff!

I like the way this story is developing - and I'm looking forward to seeing how Janie begins to pay her debt! Apparently, you ....'should not do the crime if you can't do the time...' - but something tells me that Janie is about to enjoy her life in servitude a whole lot more than she might if she found herself in jail .... keep it up!

GingerVyeGingerVyeabout 12 years ago
argghh more more!

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I hope her new employer utilizes her intelligence and not just her body

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