All Comments on 'Take the Bull by the Horn Ch. 01'

That started very good and promising. What counts for the wife obviously also counts for your dear readers. We want to know EVERYTHING that happens in California.

Great start~ Now the next chapter is key~

To 'fuck' a wife you need not unload whole Corporate Office.

Aimless , lack of of direction to achieve any meaningful conclusion

A good start. Definitely deserves a second chapter. Like the wife, we need to know EVERY detail of the Sam Francisco trip. How it makes her hot and the incredible sex they have on his return home. And don't pay attention to the critics. This is a learning process, we the readers are your guinea pigs. Enjoy! Just reminded to keep it believable