by squirmer
By the time they got there he was untied and proceeded to kick the crap out of them, leaving them bloody and broken on the floor. End of stupidity. Look it up on U-tube. Cuffs like that are easily defeated. No stars.
Sounds like fun. Can one make it do dishes too? And laundry? And I think the old lady next door needs a shag.
Nice one.
Carry on, although changing his sex would be a bit like defeating the purpose, won't it?
Evebroughtanaxthistime
What does "plastic cover over paper the mattress" actually mean? Worse, you said: "Next to it was the toilet. There was no shower curtain or interior walls. There was no toilet." --so is there a toilet or not? The premise and story line are all fine, but please have someone help you edit it to help it make sense.
Sounds about what I would like to happen to me. I want to be kidnapped and turned into a cumwhore slut by some younger boys.
Hope you get an opportunity to write more on this story. Really enjoy your story and your writing. Thanks and please continue with this story! It's too good to drop at the early parts!
Oh my god this story is so hot and its just getting started too. I hope you're planning on writing more for this. I cant wait to read about all the kinky things that are gonna happen to the new sex slave.