Taken by the Wolf Ch. 04

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"Looking forward to seeing you again, my dear," the doctor said, leering again. The way his tongue flicked out over his lips reminded her of a snake and she shuddered. Even worse, she knew that he liked seeing that kind of reaction from her but she couldn't stop it anyway.

The soldier let her lean on his arm as they walked out the door. Her body felt strange, as if it wasn't really hers. The fat, battered lips of her pussy were incredibly sore, between them and the plug in her bottom, she was forced to walk awkwardly with her thighs spread apart so that it was almost more of a waddle. Thankfully the soldier was very patient with her, walking at a pace that she could manage.

For the first time she really looked at him. He had plain brown hair and perfectly ordinary features, enough muscles to make it clear he was a fighter, but mostly he looked like a perfectly normal guy, just a bit older than her.

"Careful there," he said, catching her as she stumbled, and she nearly burst into tears just because he was being kind to her. Well, kind compared to everyone else today.

"Please," she said, clutching his arm. "Help me."

He smiled at her, patting her hand comfortingly. "You'll be okay. The Wolf always lets his toys go eventually. It's hardest at the beginning, but everyone adjusts. Some of them end up not wanting to leave. Just do your best not to get in trouble. Don't remove the plug until you're told to, don't argue when you're given an order, and don't try to fight back or escape. The real troublemakers usually get sent to Dr. Margolis until they're ready to behave."

Not the most comforting words in the world, but she took what reassurance she could from them. But who wouldn't want to leave this awfulness? Even the other girl, Abby, even though she'd called him Master she'd seemed relieved that her ordeal was over with. All she knew for sure was that, no matter what, she would do whatever it took to stay away from Dr. Margolis.

As the soldier continued to help her down the hallway, she wondered where Alex was and what was happening to him.

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Redbeard1952Redbeard1952over 10 years ago
Moving right along

I am enjoying travelling along this path. Looking forward to what is around the next turn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What a crock

Just terrible.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

this was another great chapter. i think this is one of my fav stories you do. wtg and i can't wait for more. i can't believe 2 chapters right next to each other :-)

MaynessMaynessover 10 years ago

Another good chapter. My I am quite enjoying how dark this is getting and now onto Alex! The good doctor has got to get it somehow, maybe an impossibly big but plug shoved in his ass at some point oh and an electrical current!!!!! Thanks.

Sharonmarie_13Sharonmarie_13over 10 years ago

Great story from a great author, 5 stars.

mickymouse113mickymouse113over 10 years ago
Investing in Loss

Having read your blog I realised how to phrase what I wanted to say:

I can imagine Alex realising that he has lost this round and just submitting so he can get released and then strike back. Think The cask of Armanatilliado or even the real 30 Ronin. Alex will tolerate things because he has the hope of kicking the wolfs butt.

At the very least the Wolf should address this potential issue.

mickymouse113mickymouse113over 10 years ago
Difference between Noncon and BDSM

BDSM is usually liked. The submissive submits but Noncon IMHO requires a fight between the two. I hope that this has them fighting the wolf or then even coming back and getting revenge. The trackers inserted mean that it would be possible to somehow back track to the wolfs lair.

I hope that Alex kicks the wolfs butt. Denial is not an uncommon response but Alex seem to like protecting people and so upon release I think he would feel obligated to end the threat of the wolf.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Well

I liked it

Well written, imaginative and descriptive.

What more can you ask for.

And if you don't like the subject matter, then that is your problem for being in the wrong category.

I vote a story on the structure and it's readability, and this gets a 5

GoldeniangelGoldeniangelover 10 years agoAuthor
Anon

You're right... I don't get it because I have NO idea what you're commenting about. Your first sentence makes no sense whatsoever. If you'd like to explain, I'd be happy to respond, but as it stands it just looks like you have very little grasp of language/communication and that whatever you're unhappy about is probably not my fault. Actually... no wait, it definitely isn't my fault because if you're tired of my writing then it's up to YOU to stop reading it, not for ME to change. Although if you have an actual complaint, please use complete sentences and thought structure and I'll at least be able to respond to an intelligible criticism/request.

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