by abandon_thought
I saw the stories you have on here, they lookeded promising, but they all petered out too soon.
Why the stop?
Your good imagination shows in the details you're working into the story. I also tripped over the "girth," but it was easily overlooked, as were a smattering of other minor errors. It'll be fun to see where you take this when (I hope) you continue.
...at the 8 inch girth. But a fiver it is anyway, because I loved the games he played with her. That villain is a fascinating evil.