All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 03'

I hope the intruder gets his ass kicked, that would be a nice change.

Really like how you are developing he plot, hmmm he is one violent man for sure! Please post again soon, a longer chapter if poss! Thank you.

I want to keep reading. The story is intriguing, but longer chapters would be nice.

More please!!! I NEED to know what happens!!!!!

This is soooo good! Please write more, I need to know what happens!!!!

I'm dying for more! Please continue!

I'm working on it! I have several ideas of where to take this....and I keep deleting everything I write.

Thank you to the ones who gave positive feedback! You give me hope!

Tiger_B

Whatever you write is fine I want to read more!

I've been waiting for you to finish this for almost a year now. I think about it all the time and come back to check on it! Please finish your story!

This really sucks,,,,start something ,get people interested and then ,,,NOTHING,,so much of this bs on here anymore,,,,

Yet another unfinished story......

Please continue!! You are a very good writer and have potential. Don't stop. Thank you.

WHERES THE REST?!? I NEED TO KNOW HOW THIS ENDS!!!!!!!!!