All Comments on 'Taken in Battle Ch. 02'

This was too short. It needed to end after whatever happens in his tent. You could still have a cliff hanger, but I don't know any of the characters any better after this chapter than I did before it. I am intrigued to know what's next though.

Its a nice story & I agree you should put out more pages but dont let that put you off its a good story!!

I kept this one short because the next one will make up for it majorly lol And moves story along with more character background etc :)

I'm liking this story. You've got me intrested to see whats going to happen. More please :)

A short but good read. Would like more character development, looking forward to next chapter.

Next chapter is pending so hopefully will be approved in few days :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I liked what you have written. But it is far to shor to be considered even a small chapter. You really need to develop the story in each submission. Lober chapters with more detail, more events, more dialogue, more everything!

it's short and things are moving along quickly :) Tristan doesn't seem to want to wait much.. looking forward to chap 3.