by pril13
Chapter 2 anyone? How does he know who she is? Did his men know what was happening?
Makes you want to keep reading. Very good. Wish there was more to the story.
I am so glad that you wrote another fine story! This is like the first one story where you tease and build to a great climax. Please continue this line, I would like to find the connection.
Damn! I've been catching the wrong train to work. Enjoyed your story and looking forward to a continuation if there's more...I hope so!
This never happened to me while stationed in DC. Wish it would have. Enjoied it all. Short but real good.
What an enticing beginning, I really hope you will take this further!