All Comments on 'Takeover Ch. 02'

... of this wonderfully-written story, and I am glad you took the good advice you were offered -- and ignored the insults. Well done, another five stars and thank you for posting.

This was simply not interesting. There's nothing erotic about it. The cardboard characters are spouting inane dialogue. It simply wasn't worth the time spent reading it. UGH!

This was completely interesting. There's everything erotic about it. The nicely-rounded characters are given simple but purposeful dialogue. It was absolutely worth the time spent reading it. YEAH!

But seriously, I'm enjoying this series so far. Granted, I hate second tense writing but I'm willing to overlook it if everything else is solid.

Love the developing relationship, and the gender role inversion makes it really unique. Please keep more chapters coming as soon as possible!

Your role reversal stories are wonderful! Please keep writing them. It's not easy to find similar stories and you write the whole tender (albeit sappy) romance thing very well.

Don't listen to the detractors too much, you know you have an audience.

great writing. very genuine realistic characters and scenarious.. nice touches of light romance and intense sensualtiy.. keep it up..

I kept telling "myself" to pound this woman already but then, heck why not and see how things are going to happen? This is fab, seriously despite the need of smutty action.

This is amazing! Simply stunning, I need a cute little house husband.

Its so lovely..beautifully written and keeps one engrossed.

Is it hot in here, or is it just this story?

Absolutely beautuful story. Man awesome