All Comments on 'Taking Abby'

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indigodragonindigodragonover 18 years ago
9 montha of lust

that was hot. i like how they continued to have sex even after the birth of the baby. most men don't realize how sexy pregnant women can be.maybe the next baby could be his?

SEX_VAMPYRESEX_VAMPYREover 18 years ago
Wonderful stroke stoey

You know what would have really been the "icing on the cake?" if the father in law fucked her into inducing labor. hmmmmm kinky hmmm

I love pregnant sex stories. Look me up if you ever want help writing anymore. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oh My God

Oh My God that was pass hot. It was on fire and I dearly loved it. I would love to be Abby for a while having two cocks to play with is every woman's dream come true. I know there will be a part two and like that other person said maybe the next baby will be Daddy's. TTFN

sherlock40sherlock40over 18 years ago
I like the pregnant sex but the cheating crap

ruined the story. Cheating wife combined with a piece of shit father (doesn't deserve to be called Dad) just isn't a great story. You should do a sequel where the son finds out, beats the holy living crap out of his father, kicks his cheating slut out, keeps the baby and then makes one with his mom. Hahaha.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Very erotic and natural

Very good until just the last few lines. The mention of the rubber ruined the rest of it, because the father-in-law should have been the next daddy.

JesseGJesseGover 16 years ago
Hot baby luv'n

The story was great up to the part in the hospital after delivery. This story was believable except that knowing how sucking on those milk-filled mounds of flesh would not produce "milk" that soon, I would have left that part out. I would love to read a sequel where the f-i-l becomes papa to baby #2 and that Mom gets sonny to hit on her to make up for the lack of wife's availability. Maybe a four-cum?

don87654don87654almost 16 years ago
More babies needed....

Why make him wear a rubber? I would have thought that she would have wanted his baby, too?

ZippityDoDaDayZippityDoDaDayalmost 2 years ago

"The sweet aroma of her bowels" Seriously?

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