by Shaima32
Had to check on this bikie gangs and im scared to hell, this is a load of .... Puh name it i cant find a name for this kind
This story has a very promising future. It makes me more ready than ever to get back to work on my own writing. Looking forward to more. Love all your stories.
Mmm I like this story. Good introduction, interesting. I'm all giddy about the possibilities. I have a feeling it will be hot as fuck.
Loved the beginning, if the rest is like that, I can't wait for the next tattoo.... Thanks for sharing!
What a very fascinating protagonist/heroine(?) you've created in Kelly. She really is a "...bin there, done that..." kind of person. I'm really looking forward to the next part(s) to see how she and the story develop.
It's always a pleasure to read a story that flows well, has a good set up and storyline. Not having to trip over bad spelling and punctuation are two added bonuses that make your stories stand out. Thanks. I hope to see part 2 soon.
(if you ever decide you'd like the use of an editor/proofreader I'd be happy to volunteer even though it appears you don't need much help).